To make my piece more of a story, I would revise it as follows: -begin with an anecdote about a student who OD'd at UMD -explain what a good Samaritan policy is -quote several students who think UMD needs one -talk to the administration / or find someone who doesn't agree with implementing the policy -finish with students talking about their future plans to lobby for it
I think that would present more of a story arc... A) something happened, B) people are motivated to action, C) there are obstacles, and D) the struggle continues.
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To make my piece more of a story, I would revise it as follows:
ReplyDelete-begin with an anecdote about a student who OD'd at UMD
-explain what a good Samaritan policy is
-quote several students who think UMD needs one
-talk to the administration / or find someone who doesn't agree with implementing the policy
-finish with students talking about their future plans to lobby for it
I think that would present more of a story arc... A) something happened, B) people are motivated to action, C) there are obstacles, and D) the struggle continues.