The information is great. I think the audio is fine. Maybe you could be a little more upbeat with your narrative. It sounds a bit monotone. I also noticed a few shots were used twice. If there could be more variety in your sequencing that might help. The low footage of the feet was nice. And, if you have it, another interview with an owner or athlete would be nice. Tim
UMD J-School "Slice Class" -- Multimedia for Print Journalists
This is the class blog for Journalism 328G/628G, "Special Topics in News Writing and Reporting," where we offer a crash course in audio, photo, and video journalism.
I know the audio is not quite right and there are a lot more things I need to fine tune but this is the rough idea for my final project.
ReplyDeleteThe information is great. I think the audio is fine. Maybe you could be a little more upbeat with your narrative. It sounds a bit monotone. I also noticed a few shots were used twice. If there could be more variety in your sequencing that might help. The low footage of the feet was nice. And, if you have it, another interview with an owner or athlete would be nice.
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